- You have made a start on the 3 posts we wanted to see completed so far
- You have incorporated 'Prezzi' for one post - which shows an interest in using a range of media throughout your blog
- All 3 posts need to be 'Super Visual' - You need to include images, gif's, short films etc to enhance your posts. They should not be text only.
- You technologies post could make use of JING (and certainly images) to SHOW your work in creating the CCTV effect your notes refer to. Think about how you can really show an examiner how you are using new technologies to create your film, edit it, and also to present your work. This post needs more work and development.
- Your post on 'Representation of Social Groups' makes a start at using Prezzi - but you need to take it further - show images of similar 'types' of characters. If you are creating a lead character who challenges typical female stereotypes... how will you show the audience this? Will it be through a combination of certain choices in costumes, colours, facial expressions? Make up? I suggested to Nathan that he look at the female lead in the 2011 film 'Girl With the Dragon Tattoo'. The character's name is Lisbeth Salander, she is played by actress Rooney Mara. Do some research to see how this actress constructed the character of 'Lisbeth' through costume, hair, make up, expression, and attitude... She is certainly not the typical 'damsel in distress'...
Overall, at this stage, there is 'Improvement Needed' IN for the 3 posts Becka. You need to keep working on them.
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